it is an interesting concept but like idk why the first chapter felt so....empty like why are the characters like this and why does he talk like that and idk i think the dialogues could do soooo much better It is like we were introduced to the first character super shallowly and then it gets worse lmaoooo i genuinely liked the twist where he became a teller(in the first chapter that is) the author could have done so much more U can just notice the art style- (idk i dont wanna say it :p) U can tell the author does not give a fuck about it being a nicely written plot since everything is so damn rushed for no damn reason. maybe im dissapointed and i cant stop comparing it to orv where every single thing is detailed and i am getting major harem vibes (the girls are just drawn like that for some reason) which is like ughhhhhhhh not again istg if u use this idea for this shitttt
it is an interesting concept but like idk why the first chapter felt so....empty
like why are the characters like this and
why does he talk like that
and idk i think the dialogues could do soooo much better
It is like we were introduced to the first character super shallowly and then it gets worse
lmaoooo
i genuinely liked the twist where he became a teller(in the first chapter that is)
the author could have done so much more
U can just notice the art style- (idk i dont wanna say it :p)
U can tell the author does not give a fuck about it being a nicely written plot since everything is so damn rushed for no damn reason.
maybe im dissapointed and i cant stop comparing it to orv where every single thing is detailed
and i am getting major harem vibes (the girls are just drawn like that for some reason) which is like ughhhhhhhh not again
istg if u use this idea for this shitttt