yea basically but this is meant to be a oneshot and the author didn't have the time to expand as much as a full 5 6 chapters would have
I am aware of that, but I still think it should have been possible to have more thought-bubbles or something, so you get a better idea of the character. For example, Luca's face darkens when he hears they are dating, but you never get to know if maybe he likes Takeru or it could also be that he already knew they were mates. Even one sentence from Luca could have clarified that, and given a better idea of Luca's perspective and what kind of character he is. If there were just slight changes, I think the story could have been told better is all I'm saying :)
no i totally agree with both statements and the story could have gone on for a bit more pages but the plot was kinda complex that i dont personally think that it could have been resolved in a one shot
Yeah, the concept was quite big and it would have fit better in a full-volume manga, where there would be space to explore the dilemma and the characters better.
Chapter 5 was so rushed and filled with easy solutions that it seemed like a parody. Like, the concept was nice; omega and alpha loves each other and chooses to be together, but then the real alpha mate comes along. However, it seemed like no feelings were explained, and no one even hesitated before they all had sex.
The conflict of the story was basically solved with Luca saying "oh no, you love him, but you lust for me, so let's all become a threesome!"
I like that it ended with a threesome, but it had so much potential to go through a big omegaverse dilemma, and then it was just done in a really lazy way.