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It was horseshit, nothing about this was redeemable if I had I Time Machine I’d stop myself from wasting my money bc time is money and this was a waste of my time. The plot SHIT the characters surrounding the MC SHIT. This was terrible if I could unsee/uread this story I would.
I'll join you in the endeavor of unseeing this. It really is something I didn't need to see. ┗( T﹏T )┛
Okay, no.
Review Time, so bail if you don't wanna hear critique.
The base plot was interesting (play a salesman to get dirt on an actor) but things quickly turned to shit in just one chapter. And I am not bothering with more of this.
If the story had a more comedy-based tone and if there wasn't actual rape with the victim actually being afraid, the 'plottwist' would have been able to be laughed off for the most part. But it's not. It is held in a more realistic, serious tone and hence the happenings are NOT option to shrug off.
The tone of the story is more realistic/casual, or empty I should say really, so the fact the MC was actually scared and things still went on really was NOT pleasant. And the sorry and sad attempt of the author just shrugging it off did not work since neither the MC actually got into what was happening to him nor did the rapist actually have a pleasant personality and the MC's so-called friend too did the opposite of what was needed to make any of this acceptable even as a porn-type fantasy read (who is REALLY a piece of shit btw for doing this).
The idea was nice, but it was entirely ruined by lack of everything.
The art cannot carry this either, it's average and has no panels here and there that actually hook you in a moment at least.
Not even the smut scenes are worth more than a glance as there is nothing special about those either. Which could have maybe saved this from getting an entirely negative review.
As I said; I will not bother with this past the first chapter.
Maybe the writing after that will be decent or good, but if the intro is horseshit that means the rest is also horseshit. Based on seeing much horseshit over the years, I speak from frequent experience. :'D
This might be a nice read for people who disregard literally any sort of writing skills but for those that need the story and character behavior to be at least somewhat pleasant: Look elsewhere.
I wouldn't bother recommending this, ever. There is literally nothing positive I can find about this except the VERY core plotline. Which I hope someone more talented will copy someday, but oh well. ^^;