
The "this could have been" argument is so weird. Because it's simply not. It's not a story targeting people who are just into pet play. The author wrote a psychological BL with the 'dog' theme, used it as the character's trauma of being called a stinky dog. This couldn't have been "a perfect story for people with these type of fetishes" because that was not the intention, it's not about pet play kink.

Mmm…no. This seems like another example of BL authors using the “psychological” genre as an excuse to write and fulfill their weird r@pe fantasies. There are ways to incorporate trauma in stories and this is simply not it. It’s borribky written because it’s just another MLM fetishziton story with no real plot.

How is this "horribly written"? And it's "not it" because...? But that's not even my point.
Okay, so? Let me repeat: it couldn't have been "a perfect story for people with these type of fetishes" because that's not what the author intended. If the author wanted to write a story about safe sane consensual pet play, they would. If someone wants to read safe sane consensual pet play, they will find one and read it. The "perfect" (in your understanding, because maybe for some ppl with a pet play kink this is the perfect story) version of this doesn't exist, it couldn't "have been".

"Theirs a difference between a kink and just straight of weirdness" - CNC is literally a kink. And it's a common fantasy. Bivona, Critelli & Clark "Women’s Rape Fantasies: An Empirical Evaluation of the Major Explanations" (2012) - 62% of 355 participants reported having rape fantasies. Lehmiller "Tell Me What You Want: The Science of Sexual Desire and How It Can Help You Improve Your Sex Life" (2018) - out of 4,175 participants two-thirds of women and half the men reported having rape fantasies.
The story literally just started and I wouldn't say there's no developments or plot. Idk why you already decided there's none.
I skipped to last chapter just to add this comment. Do y’all ever get tired of reading s/a stories? Like this could have been a perfect story for people with these type of fetishes if he wasn’t forced that first chapter