hmm, 4/5 could've been better

daddy June 26, 2024 3:12 am

its cute, sure, I would've appreciated seeing more.. reciprocated love from the uke.. seme pulled up with a baby and suddenly he was all on board. I mean, I would hope the uke came crawling back to be with the seme at some point

idk, i felt the love in the beginning chapters, then I got their backstory and it was a bit much, haha

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    GumjiNyoki ♥ July 16, 2024 7:38 am

    True, for some reason that lil bit part of the story made me feel a little hollow. He's like i was born to meet you [the baby?] Like.. umm. Shouldnt it be more like to be a part of their family or sumthing. I feel bad for seme, cuz i dont really know if he's really loved you know. Like that bit made me hollow and doubted the whole story and now im just sad.


    Sorry ranted here for a sev.

    GumjiNyoki ♥ July 16, 2024 7:39 am

    But the dic drawings are amazinng though..

    Snowy July 31, 2024 2:26 am
    True, for some reason that lil bit part of the story made me feel a little hollow. He's like i was born to meet you [the baby?] Like.. umm. Shouldnt it be more like to be a part of their family or sumthing. I f... GumjiNyoki ♥

    Yeah this just made me sad, relationships should be equal and seme deserves to feel loved too after everything he does for the uke. This just made me sad, it felt like the uke cares more about the baby. He wasn't willing to stop because he loved the seme but it was for the baby. I just feel bad.

    Snowy July 31, 2024 2:29 am
    Yeah this just made me sad, relationships should be equal and seme deserves to feel loved too after everything he does for the uke. This just made me sad, it felt like the uke cares more about the baby. He wasn... Snowy

    Which is weird cuz in the author's other work you can see how desperately the uke loves the seme

    GumjiNyoki ♥ July 31, 2024 11:47 am
    Which is weird cuz in the author's other work you can see how desperately the uke loves the seme Snowy

    Oohh! This sounds better, i havent read it i believe.. can you drop the title here please T..T

    Snowy August 1, 2024 6:12 am
    Oohh! This sounds better, i havent read it i believe.. can you drop the title here please T..T GumjiNyoki ♥

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