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The whole point of the second story bottoms reaction is that he’s reacting to the top’s withdrawal and regret of sleeping with him cause the top is acting like it was something he did TO the bottom as if he thinks bottom couldn’t possibly have wanted it and couldn’t possibly stop him if he didn’t want it when bottom’s clearly stronger than him,the whole point is that it was wanted on both sides and bottom was hurt cause top was suddenly acting like it wasn’t with the “what have I done” shit
The first story just feels like it missed the mark, the concept of him wanting to be hurt the same way that he hurt the mc just doesn't feel right when we're talking about just rejecting someone in a homophobic manner. I like certain aspects of it, like how they actually showed the consequences of the rape, they didn't just skirt past it, but it just fell a little flat for me. Also the second story is fine except for the fact they showed the bottom crying afterwards and that makes something that makes something that was already iffy just straight up feel like rape.