Honestly this story was wack from start to finish. Cannibalism used interchangeably with love is something we all recognize and I ADORE. I eat it up every time (pun intended). This was a great read… however I feel as tho it could’ve benefited a lot from being a tragedy. Yeah Viss ate Graven’s arm and regretted but that’s not enough. I wanted some real salivating angst filled with long term, agonizing regret, denial, and DESPAIR. I wanted Viss to lose to his impulse, to his nature to consume, and devour Graven (oh he devoured him alright LMAO). I wanted Viss to be found out and burned at the stake for his sins, Graven never being able to fulfill his desire to be consumed. They cute or whatever at the end tho. They
Honestly this story was wack from start to finish. Cannibalism used interchangeably with love is something we all recognize and I ADORE. I eat it up every time (pun intended). This was a great read… however I feel as tho it could’ve benefited a lot from being a tragedy. Yeah Viss ate Graven’s arm and regretted but that’s not enough. I wanted some real salivating angst filled with long term, agonizing regret, denial, and DESPAIR. I wanted Viss to lose to his impulse, to his nature to consume, and devour Graven (oh he devoured him alright LMAO). I wanted Viss to be found out and burned at the stake for his sins, Graven never being able to fulfill his desire to be consumed.
They cute or whatever at the end tho. They