Honestly , I don’t think the story plot so bad . We can’t have series and novels with smart characters all the time, and it’s just the beginning of the story, so you can’t judge that fast.
but i can though lol. lily chose someone she just met over someone she’s known all of her life in the matter of 10 chapters. rose has done nothing for her aside from saying “i love you”.
That’s why I said we can’t have novels with smart MC all the time , here our MC is just dumb and for sure she is gonna pay it back in the future . Anna is for sure gonna give her some hard times or there will be circumstances which will make difficult for Lily to get back Anna , bcz looking at the storyline , she will definitely search for Anna again one day . This is why I’m telling you to not criticize the writers , bcz the storyline was just main to show how the MC will be fucking up at the beginning and will prolly learn from her errors later.
this artist has to find better writers. such good art gone to waste. it’s the second time now