The story starts off really strong, but it starts to fizzle and get convoluted as Ze gets closer to the village in his dreams. Honestly, I think this story needed about 30 more chapters to fully flesh it out. I needed more information about the deaths and why the astronomers died in succession and its importance. How the shadow moved? Why his parents hid everything. I just wanted more...more fleshed out motives instead of weird ending. Also did MC maintain his powers?? So much left to explain and explore.
The story starts off really strong, but it starts to fizzle and get convoluted as Ze gets closer to the village in his dreams. Honestly, I think this story needed about 30 more chapters to fully flesh it out. I needed more information about the deaths and why the astronomers died in succession and its importance. How the shadow moved? Why his parents hid everything. I just wanted more...more fleshed out motives instead of weird ending. Also did MC maintain his powers?? So much left to explain and explore.