This story is so convoluted and dramatic. It constantly threatens confinement of the char...

Eyo it's ya boi June 23, 2024 3:35 pm

This story is so convoluted and dramatic.
It constantly threatens confinement of the character but never goes through with it, it constantly reminds the reader of revenge but it doesn't have the balls to execute it. The story started out dark but that's not what the author wants to depict. The whiplash between cute and edgy is brutal y'all. What story did they take the original story from because I'd rather read that tragedy at this point just because NOTHING is happening in this "new" story the "author" is writing.

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    Apathetic_fluffball June 24, 2024 5:51 am

    Right??
    It's ominous, but at the same time it tries to come off as fluffy.
    It flip flops between psychological games and romantic scenes, trying to be both, but actually being neither

    Eyo it's ya boi June 24, 2024 6:02 am
    Right??It's ominous, but at the same time it tries to come off as fluffy.It flip flops between psychological games and romantic scenes, trying to be both, but actually being neither Apathetic_fluffball

    It's kind to call them romantic scenes. The main characters have the equivalent chemistry of a deflated balloon and a damp sock. The reason why is because their characterization is inconsistent, it's impossible to match them together when they're written to the writer's whimsy.

    This is a story that's as wide as an ocean and as deep as a puddle.

    layla June 25, 2024 8:07 am

    Yupp exactly. I read this manhwa thinking it'd be a dark romance but these characters just keep clowning. Pretty exhausting to read lmaoo