I'm gonna go against the ocean of praise here but

CrD June 22, 2024 7:43 am

This story isn't wholesome or cute. It's two immature people who shouldn't have been together getting together in a toxic relationship that only lasted bc of a non-consentual accidental pregnancy. And then all of their trauma/health issues evaporate in a span of a couple months for plot convience, so they can be together one more time after breaking up multiple times.
They should have been dating CPTSD therapy. It may look nice compared to psychological torture levels of abusive pairings that are common in other stories of this genre but it's still ridiculous.
The timeline of the story, esp the end (and sides) is just whack and the sex scenes are very uninspired.

Responses
    YourMochi June 22, 2024 8:10 am

    What crap are you even writing ....0 comprehension skill

    CrD June 22, 2024 8:23 am
    What crap are you even writing ....0 comprehension skill YourMochi

    Says you lol. Y'all have broken taste buds but that doesn't make the trash you love great

    CrD June 22, 2024 8:24 am
    What crap are you even writing ....0 comprehension skill YourMochi

    Like it's funny you say I lack comprehension but you can't even understand what I wrote and actually argue how I'm wrong instead of resulting to petty insults like some middle schooler ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

    YourMochi June 22, 2024 8:44 am
    Says you lol. Y'all have broken taste buds but that doesn't make the trash you love great CrD

    Lmao it's okay you were born dumb garbage and your parents don't love you :*

    YourMochi June 22, 2024 8:45 am
    Like it's funny you say I lack comprehension but you can't even understand what I wrote and actually argue how I'm wrong instead of resulting to petty insults like some middle schooler ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ CrD

    Lmaooo 0 comprehension skills go to a doctor maybe he can fix you

    YourMochi June 22, 2024 9:00 am
    Says you lol. Y'all have broken taste buds but that doesn't make the trash you love great CrD

    Said the boku academia freak lmaooo shut up you garbage pls and sont ever comment again with your 0 comprehension skill

    tint June 23, 2024 5:11 am
    Lmao it's okay you were born dumb garbage and your parents don't love you :* YourMochi

    ngl, this line was cringe

    tint June 23, 2024 5:11 am
    Lmao it's okay you were born dumb garbage and your parents don't love you :* YourMochi

    no offense tho

    CrD June 23, 2024 5:20 am
    ngl, this line was cringe tint

    Can't fault little kids for behavioural issues. Hopefully their caregivers step in bc OP is not gonna make it through highschool without a sea of tears ( ̄∇ ̄")

    YourMochi June 23, 2024 9:17 am
    Can't fault little kids for behavioural issues. Hopefully their caregivers step in bc OP is not gonna make it through highschool without a sea of tears ( ̄∇ ̄") CrD

    Whatever makes you sleep the night kid xd

    CrD June 23, 2024 2:53 pm
    Can't fault little kids for behavioural issues. Hopefully their caregivers step in bc OP is not gonna make it through highschool without a sea of tears ( ̄∇ ̄") CrD

    I'm surprised Mangago let's people block someone, but still tag them and reply to their message while you no longer have the option.
    Truly some middle school behaviour

    buscaovejas June 23, 2024 4:27 pm

    Sorry but I can't totally agree with you about the pace...
    And one of the things I like about the story is that any of them are 'perfect'.
    You say is a toxic relationship and yes, the agreement at the beginnig wasn't bc of love or anything like that... but that changes with time in this story.

    You say they recover too fast.
    However, they spent months as friends with benefits first without relaising their own feelings in Cheon-oh's case and with fear of telling them and loosing what thay had at the moment in Yi-Rim's. Then Cheon-Oh relaised but neither of them said what they feel until Yi-Rim gets admitted to the hospital, they had sex bc Cheon-Oh's rut arrive suddenly and Yi-Rim disappear.
    When Yi-rim go to OB he is 2 months pregnant and Cheon doens't find him immediately. And even when they get together, Cheon wass taking pills for months before Yi-Rim discovers it and disappear again... And when Yuho goes to tell Yi-Rim that Cheon is going back to swimm he said the competition is in 3 months, time Cheon has to train without pills, with omegas...

    So I'd say it takes them at least a year to get there since they met.
    Did you calculate more or less that period of time? Do you still find it was rushed?

    I respect your opinion: You don't like the story.
    Please, respect that others might like it.

    alli_son June 23, 2024 5:02 pm
    Sorry but I can't totally agree with you about the pace...And one of the things I like about the story is that any of them are 'perfect'.You say is a toxic relationship and yes, the agreement at the beginnig wa... buscaovejas

    slayyed

    daddy June 23, 2024 9:03 pm
    Sorry but I can't totally agree with you about the pace...And one of the things I like about the story is that any of them are 'perfect'.You say is a toxic relationship and yes, the agreement at the beginnig wa... buscaovejas

    Is this story worth it? I dislike what could be called useless drama, it sounds like the uke was running from him..

    CrD June 25, 2024 3:27 pm
    Sorry but I can't totally agree with you about the pace...And one of the things I like about the story is that any of them are 'perfect'.You say is a toxic relationship and yes, the agreement at the beginnig wa... buscaovejas

    Thank you for such a well thought out reply.
    Personally I just couldn't get over how childish the relationship was but I am very harsh on weak relationships with unplanned children. Also Yi-Rim endangering himself and consequently his baby because he's neglecting himself is( ̄へ ̄)

    I could wave away the timeline feeling rushed aside the less than 3 month "recovery" for Cheon-Oh. He has struggled for years and he wasn't always using the smell blocking tablets. From my understanding of the comic they were a last resort when all the different therapies failed, so his C-PTSD trauma response going away in 3 months because Yi-Rim's love is conditional rubs me the wrong way from multiple angles.
    Perhaps I would have felt more positive about the exact same timeline if the comic didn't leave most developments for the background, though.

    CrD June 25, 2024 3:30 pm
    Is this story worth it? I dislike what could be called useless drama, it sounds like the uke was running from him.. daddy

    Uke ghosts his lover twice. There's a lot of unnecessary drama ╥﹏╥

    daddy June 25, 2024 11:32 pm
    Uke ghosts his lover twice. There's a lot of unnecessary drama ╥﹏╥ CrD

    ahh, looks like ill be leaving this one alone then.. do you know any other stories with kids involved that isnt toxic?