disappointing

aloe June 22, 2024 12:06 am

The Synopsis was great and for a BL Manhwa, the art is quite good. But the story was rather disappointing…

From the initial to 40+ chapters; the story just felt stagnant. There’s also a huge jump in the story from time to time which is weird and doesn’t compliment with the story at all. this is where I think why it feels lacking overall.

The story also kind of leans towards mystery but even the story’s direction isn’t clear. Unpredictability is great for a story but only if executed flawlessly, not on this however…

The creator could’ve have also polish the character’s background & emotions because the only clear emotions we can see are with the ML, not even the MC.

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