This story is a good example of good idea and art. Bad execution. Like, it isn’t the worst, and something about this story seems very intriguing, but it all just seems so random and surface level. There’s barely any explanation for a lot of things, and it sometimes feels like a chapter is missing, when they’re referring to conversations and things we didn’t see. you were good. I’m waiting for you to be great :/
This story is a good example of good idea and art. Bad execution. Like, it isn’t the worst, and something about this story seems very intriguing, but it all just seems so random and surface level. There’s barely any explanation for a lot of things, and it sometimes feels like a chapter is missing, when they’re referring to conversations and things we didn’t see. you were good. I’m waiting for you to be great :/