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Shannon June 20, 2024 7:53 am

Ts is genuinely ass. Like the very plot is dookie. The fact that they quickly accepted that she lied to them just so she could get better is so shallow. There's actually no character development here it's just straight up smut.

You'd expect maybe the characters would be like "oh I don't really feel comfortable around you cause lying basically formed our relationship but maybe we can try and rebuild!!" But no. It was some stupid ass thing that went like "oh we forgive you!!" Just like that. No conflict between them other than the emo guy.

It's just smut and even then it's ass. Not to mention how they boiled down the side characters to one thing. "Oh I guess I should compliment her wand

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    Shannon June 20, 2024 7:55 am

    - like no. Author needs to write the characters better. Like I cannot tell you one memorable thing about them. The only thing I sorta like is how mc really wants to get rid of the curse and feels bad for using ml but other than that the story is generic and boring