was so hot i can’t even lie

levipleasecallmeback June 19, 2024 9:40 am

the wall squish with him being rubbed on the cold, shower wall? getting manhandled from the carry, to the mating press, then the reverse riding… i wish the author would put this much effort into the writing too!

the plot is very confused. it wants to go somewhere but it’s throwing in random past lore and hasn’t given us any redeeming or relatable characteristics. i wish the characters werent so stuck in their type cast because they feel one-dimensional and lacking despite being on chapter 30

Responses
    Milk June 19, 2024 11:43 am

    omg so fr, like im lost with the story all i see is paygorn

    levipleasecallmeback June 19, 2024 9:04 pm
    omg so fr, like im lost with the story all i see is paygorn Milk

    there’s more focus on the rape and unnecessary tension > the actual plot and story building