It feels kinda rushed?

Raon Miru June 18, 2024 3:06 am

There should be some parts where abel is also there during the prince's lessons, it kinda emphasized how the poison affects abel little by little everytime they increase the dosage. Abel sleeps from time to time and in this part is where abel slept for 3days straight , and after waking up, he couldn't move too much so he couldn't join the prince's lessons, so the prince is looking for him. And Norhex ordered the recorder to give the antidote to Abel

Responses
    SuouNono June 18, 2024 3:44 am

    honestly i get you. it would be better if they eased into the idea that he was getting poisoned

    Raon Miru June 18, 2024 1:25 pm
    honestly i get you. it would be better if they eased into the idea that he was getting poisoned SuouNono

    Yesss, so there would be like building up before the angst?? Idk how to explain but yeah something like this ahahahah