That was amazing Very well written indeed The parents were very childish and did not deser...

Euna (I make long ass essays) June 17, 2024 7:17 pm

That was amazing
Very well written indeed
The parents were very childish and did not deserve to have a child and treat them like that
They did irreversible psychological damage just because they were too petty to reconcile and talk to each other like normal adults

Anyways i freaking love the writing and especially the dialogue in the kid's perspective
It felt so real and I felt all sorts of emotions
Storytelling was great, honestly what moves me the most abt this is that this can actually happen in real life and its just sad
The development of a child is so fragile that it can literally scar them for life when they experience a traumatic experience

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