
While I support the consensus that the story was terrible, I completely understand where you're coming from after visiting the author's Instagram. People are being so harsh she turned off the comments on her latest post. It takes very little effort to critique something, but so much energy to make content, good or bad. To tear a fledgling artist apart on her first real experience going solo on a project longer than a single chapter is rude. There's a difference between constructive criticism and feedback to hone one's craft and people online are being incredibly belligerent. However, I definitely don't think this is good storytelling and that the author would benefit from a story building workshop.

I think all of you are failing to understand that a lot of the parts of the story you hate are intentional. She wanted to tell a ntr story, and that is what she did. But even that was really poorly done. She deserves to hear how shitty her story is. Tell it loud and do it everywhere. She does not need to make anymore stories. This is the woman who wanted to improve bad thinking diary with a cheating arc. She is just putting her own fetish in her work.

When was it said she was creating an NTR story? Also, I've never heard of the artist wanting a cheating arc for Bad Thinking Diary. You gotta understand, I literally just looked at her Instagram earlier today and don't know anything about the author. All I'm saying is that she is a first time storyteller aside from a one-shot and that there's a nice way of critiquing someone's work without being rude. I think it's important to give feedback critiquing any work as there is always room for improvement, but I also think that can be done with tact. I can safely say I don't like this story, I even have it on a dislike list, but that doesn't mean I'll be obnoxious about it.

I honestly don't understand your point. This story is terrible. There's no plot; it's more like a porn movie. The characters are just tropes with no development from start to finish. The entire plot is basically Anna suffering, Lily being dumb and horny, and Rose acting like a cartoon villain with no personality. Only the truly simple-minded could find something to like about her. The last chapter was basically one long torture scene. What constructive feedback do you expect? This is what the author wanted to write, and it's awful. People dislike it, and she should know

Without a doubt, she should know people dislike it, but that doesn't mean being rude. You're entitled to your own opinion and don't have to understand mine. I'm not saying this work is even good. In fact, I don't like it myself, which I already said. However, explaining why it is unliked instead of insulting the creator will just always be a better choice in my eyes unless the content created promotes a violent or abusive ideas. Remaining as level headed, calm, as possible just seems like a more constructive pattern.
can you guys chill and give the author/creator a break she might not create another GL because of your shitty immature comments in here or in her IG and twitter she get the point accross already