The writing is bad.

Nanashi June 15, 2024 9:41 pm

At this point, this isn't a story it's just nonsensical hentai, In the beginning, I thought that this story had so much potential but now it's just ruined with bad writing, what's the point of this story? Did any of the characters have any arcs? This just left a sour taste. BTW there is more to the story I meant porn... its just fluff not worth the time

Responses
    Nanashi June 15, 2024 9:49 pm

    Now that i think back what was the fucking point of showing Anna's back story??? The self-insert (writer) didn't do anything with it. This is so trash it has to take the number 1 spot for the most terrible Yuri manga/manhwa/manhua

    NotCool June 15, 2024 10:00 pm

    The purpose was clearly to make you feel worse about her being rejected. Anna's only purpose was to make you feel bad for her. But yeah, this was trash. I hope Lily get her bad ending in the next chapter. She managed to make the single worst protagonist of any yuri story ever in the form of Lily. That is something at least.

    AreYouSerious? June 15, 2024 11:30 pm

    The author clearly thinks she is Rose. This is all a fetish thing for her.