it could’ve been better!!

levipleasecallmeback June 15, 2024 7:02 pm

if it was longer, i see this playing out as a mafia trope. i liked the idea of ml thinking mc was a spy or something, and believing in that huge misunderstanding when mc was literally only starving lmao. i think the concept was really good and had potential to be a full story on its own. but the male lead is just so ugly to me, he looks like a dorito shaped pelican

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