Well done detail

VenusStuff June 13, 2024 7:24 am

In the beginning I was soooo irritated with Cliff. Yes the author has influence but something about a man getting man at a woman who has 0 influence over who she’s marrying rubs me wrong. He has ALL the power! but knowing what we know now, knowing that Cliff thinks she’s giddy about having forced him into a marriage makes his reaction a lot more understandable. Idk when you think about how she must look to others it changes things a bit and makes for more understandable character choices… one of my top isekai irks is characters acting too extreme or being inconsistent based on what is needed in that moment and I thought that smoothed it over nice

Responses
    Marpter June 18, 2024 4:10 pm

    Cliff is the big brother who's still under the writer's influence.
    I believe you mean Killian

    VenusStuff June 18, 2024 6:35 pm
    Cliff is the big brother who's still under the writer's influence.I believe you mean Killian Marpter

    Oh whoops- yes I meant Jillian

    VenusStuff June 18, 2024 6:36 pm
    Cliff is the big brother who's still under the writer's influence.I believe you mean Killian Marpter

    Killian ** OJLKIHUG