Then don't read it

Chaotic.Neutral <3 June 13, 2024 3:06 am

If you don't like the story then don't read it, I'm all for constructive criticism but all the comments I read through are literally just complaints cause y'all find the story boring or whatever. If it's boring then don't read it. The story actually has a lot of potential for improvement really. It's dynamic is just a bit weird and doesn't know where it wants to pin the focus which makes the story a little lackluster, characters seem to be having random development of feeling cause there is no focus. If they can find a focus and run with it and work on the pacing, the story would be so much better.

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    whispering_storm June 18, 2024 4:02 am

    I like the story but this ‘if you don’t like it then don’t read it’ take doesn’t make sense to me. People are free to express their like or dislike of a story and some might be reading to see if it gets better or just bc of plain curiosity. Nothing much to that.

    Chaotic.Neutral <3 June 18, 2024 6:20 am
    I like the story but this ‘if you don’t like it then don’t read it’ take doesn’t make sense to me. People are free to express their like or dislike of a story and some might be reading to see if it ge... whispering_storm

    I don't really have much to say to you since you like it. Go off I guess and defend those who don't need it. They've pretty much either ignored me and continued to do what they do or just stopped reading it. just as they are allowed to express their "dislike" for the story, I can express my dislike for their words <3. It wasn't a command and nor can I force anyone to stop reading the story but just as they can show their dislike for something so can I.

    whispering_storm June 19, 2024 3:47 am
    I don't really have much to say to you since you like it. Go off I guess and defend those who don't need it. They've pretty much either ignored me and continued to do what they do or just stopped reading it. ju... Chaotic.Neutral <3

    Whatever floats your boat bro. Just don’t attack commenters for expressing how they feel about the story they’re reading. I mean, that’s the point of the comment section on the story’s page.

    Chaotic.Neutral <3 June 19, 2024 5:03 am
    Whatever floats your boat bro. Just don’t attack commenters for expressing how they feel about the story they’re reading. I mean, that’s the point of the comment section on the story’s page. whispering_storm

    The intent wasn't malicious and nobody seem to think of it as such so it wasn't an attack. My tone def was snarky but I didn't harm anyone in anyway except you apparently who the comment has nothing for.

    whispering_storm June 19, 2024 1:42 pm
    The intent wasn't malicious and nobody seem to think of it as such so it wasn't an attack. My tone def was snarky but I didn't harm anyone in anyway except you apparently who the comment has nothing for. Chaotic.Neutral <3

    I guess using the word ‘attack’ wasn’t accurate but as long as you got how snarky your comment was, it’s all good lil bro.

    Chaotic.Neutral <3 June 19, 2024 3:16 pm
    I guess using the word ‘attack’ wasn’t accurate but as long as you got how snarky your comment was, it’s all good lil bro. whispering_storm

    Duh, I know what I put over the internet and I know the million of different ways people could read it. I'm not an opinionated dumbass. I'm just a person who says how they feel when they feel it.