The story is well written but the ending is dissapointing

Chiaki June 13, 2024 1:35 am

Wow I just read the raws, holy moly
The end was so dissatisfying ngl
The writing is really good and the visuals are stunning.
I really like this but the ending was so rushed and I was expecting more.

Responses
    Koro~sensei June 13, 2024 1:38 am

    Spoils please (=・ω・=)

    Chiaki June 13, 2024 1:52 am
    Spoils please (=・ω・=) Koro~sensei

    Spoiler:













    This story is completed in 33 chapters and basically it's more trauma, Mc kills himself in the past, Narye goes to a shaman to bind their souls together and has to endlessly suffer until he meets Mc again.
    He manipulates Mc into thinking someone else is the reincarnated Narye, gaslights the hell out of him and in the end Narye swears to keep his guard up bc MC's trauma runs deep and he's afraid he'll leave again, they live together "happily" ever after. The end.
    + sex in the present

    Koro~sensei June 13, 2024 1:57 am
    Spoiler:This story is completed in 33 chapters and basically it's more trauma, Mc kills himself in the past, Narye goes to a shaman to bind their souls together and has to endlessly suffer until he meets Mc aga... Chiaki

    Eewwwwww who thought this story was a good idea. I swear bl writers nowadays need to be on the FBI watch list bc coming up with stories like this can’t be normal (︶︿︶)=凸

    Thank you for spoiling(≧∀≦)

    Chiaki June 13, 2024 2:05 am
    Eewwwwww who thought this story was a good idea. I swear bl writers nowadays need to be on the FBI watch list bc coming up with stories like this can’t be normal (︶︿︶)=凸Thank you for spoiling(≧�... Koro~sensei

    Honestly I hate abusive relationships but I really appreciate good writing so I can't say I hate it.
    Like Narye is a prime example of an obsessive/yandere Top.
    But it makes me lowkey mad to have it end there.
    I wanted Mc to find out and leave him and escape somehow.
    Lol I bet they use the keywords the FBI watched out for to think up stories! Yeah definitely a wild story to come up with.

    You're welcome

    ThisIsTheWay June 13, 2024 1:48 pm
    Eewwwwww who thought this story was a good idea. I swear bl writers nowadays need to be on the FBI watch list bc coming up with stories like this can’t be normal (︶︿︶)=凸Thank you for spoiling(≧�... Koro~sensei

    I love your comment :D