This story could have had potential but I feel like the narration is all over the place I would have liked to be introduced to his amnesia first thing instead of the /other problem/ maybe set the main LI as someone that was already buzzing in MC life something like MC saying he had to deal with this intern for some time this is an overused plot but it could be presented better with some planning
This story could have had potential but I feel like the narration is all over the place
I would have liked to be introduced to his amnesia first thing instead of the /other problem/
maybe set the main LI as someone that was already buzzing in MC life something like MC saying he had to deal with this intern for some time
this is an overused plot but it could be presented better with some planning