I feel like I just read a string of events that happened right after the other. Like, just plot points without any actual transition cause I don’t know how to describe it but it just felt off and choppy/rushed? XD like, we would be doing one thing and then next panel, something else entirely. The uke would be feeling something and that emotion almost gets explored, but then switches to a whole new emotion lol. I just wanted them to stay on one scene for a bit longer than half a page lol
I feel like I just read a string of events that happened right after the other. Like, just plot points without any actual transition cause I don’t know how to describe it but it just felt off and choppy/rushed? XD like, we would be doing one thing and then next panel, something else entirely. The uke would be feeling something and that emotion almost gets explored, but then switches to a whole new emotion lol. I just wanted them to stay on one scene for a bit longer than half a page lol