This is already ridiculous, the art is beautiful but the story is just not well done. It t...

Kei June 7, 2024 4:03 am

This is already ridiculous, the art is beautiful but the story is just not well done. It truly feels as if Lily doesn’t give a fuck about Anna, what you do mean she doesn’t love you just cause she doesn’t want to have sex because of her past? And not to mention the fact that she doesn’t know it, like idk if Anna simply didn’t tell her or if Lily didn’t ask. But either way it’s just done rushed and poorly. Once again I’m disappointed with this author. Still the most gorgeous gl art I’ve seen but wasted potential.

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    NotCool June 7, 2024 7:37 am

    Yeah, the idea that Lily loves Anna is absurd. She says she loves her, but her actions say otherwise. The story is shallow, and the characters haven't seen much development. The author really dropped the ball. I can only assume she meant for it to appear differently. To me, it almost looks like Lily hates Anna because of how she treated her and then blamed her. At best she wanted to have sex with her, but she did not love her. Just the fact that Lily did not even once speak up for Anna while Rose where saying Anna was garbage should tell you everything you need to know. Or how Anna expressed her hurt over and over and Lily never even responded to it. Just threw herself into the arms of Rose and forgot Anna existed for 6 months. It's really weird storytelling. At least there's only one chapter left.

    Kei June 7, 2024 3:12 pm
    Yeah, the idea that Lily loves Anna is absurd. She says she loves her, but her actions say otherwise. The story is shallow, and the characters haven't seen much development. The author really dropped the ball. ... NotCool

    Yeah the story is done very badly