i have never read a more poorly written, illogical, bullshit story IN MY LIFE. how does it make sense for them to start kissing? just out of nowhere? the reasoning behind all this is just absolute horse crap. doesn’t make sense. the behaviour abhorrent, the reasoning, garbage. the characters TERRIBLE. holy shit
I think it’s meant to be illogical because they’re both in such poor mental states that they just kind of do things that seem crazy I do feel like it could’ve built up a bit more to the kissing tho
i have never read a more poorly written, illogical, bullshit story IN MY LIFE. how does it make sense for them to start kissing? just out of nowhere? the reasoning behind all this is just absolute horse crap. doesn’t make sense. the behaviour abhorrent, the reasoning, garbage. the characters TERRIBLE. holy shit