Bad TL, not just the yellow font that's off here, the sentences I can't even make out what they're saying. (just so ya know looking at images doesn't make it any better.)
and the mc looks like a child compared to the ml, the ml looks like he could be her father.
although this is my comment I'll continue to read because the plot seems interesting. The art and characters are great as well, this has a lot of potential the only things in my opinion that need to be fixed are the sentences, and colors of the font.
Bad TL, not just the yellow font that's off here, the sentences I can't even make out what they're saying. (just so ya know looking at images doesn't make it any better.)
and the mc looks like a child compared to the ml, the ml looks like he could be her father.
although this is my comment I'll continue to read because the plot seems interesting. The art and characters are great as well, this has a lot of potential the only things in my opinion that need to be fixed are the sentences, and colors of the font.