Wasted potential

yuuuuri June 4, 2024 7:55 pm

The art is really good as always but this creator's stories tend to lack character arcs and a sensible pacing. Lily is the most empty headed and bland character i've ever seen...If only she had 1 ounce of character motivation behind anything she says and does....
Hope this author can learn to give their future characters some more substance bc I feel like if Lily and the Duchess had backstories and motivations shown to the audience, this cldve been a better read

Responses
    NotCool June 5, 2024 7:35 am

    Maybe. But at its core, this is a cuckolding story—more porn than plot. And even then, there wasn't much porn. So whether it's interesting depends on your definition of interesting. I don't think this kind of story has a lot of mass appeal. The characters, setting, and art had potential, but I'm not sure what could have made it interesting.

    Thursday June 5, 2024 10:04 pm

    Its frustrating to read