Missed opportunity

NutMan June 4, 2024 8:07 am

It's few 4 or so chapters are solid and I feel do the very interesting concept justice. I think the author got too caught up on why time would repeat and the mechanics of it instead of just looking at it at face value. And I get what they wanted to do with the ending, it's just the part proceeding it was so convoluted it distracts from the meaning. That's really the perfect word for it: distracted.

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