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This is so true , his character vanished after they slept together and he turned to this idiot who kept saying sorry , even their arguments and the development of their relashionship was so bland and stupid , it had so much potential when it started but I really hated it as it went on .
I also dont like that they turned her from this girl who never had experience into someone who would date anyone just to forget a man ? People dont change personalities and shift a 180 like this , both characters just turned annoying as the story went by .
Ngl I started this because I was curious and I thought it had potential but it just continues to frustrate me. I truly understood the FL’s side since it’s a pretty accurate portrayal of people I know irl. The only thing is that the plot seemed to be developing in an entertaining way to get to the prologue- but right after the prologue event I feel like the characters and plot just when the downhill. I genuinely believed that this was more plot based since there isn’t actually that much smut, but now it feels more smut with bad plot.
It rushed the development extremely fast, and it’s disappointing because I was looking forward to the development of the ML and their relationship. But you mean to tell me after sleeping with her, he turns obsessed and into a love sick fool? The plot basically makes the characters, liking each other as their entire personalities. She became like a void cause she was apart from him. He suddenly doesn’t have any personality left or logic cause he likes her. I actually was interested in his personality and maturity before he realized he liked her. I hate it when authors abandon the ML’s personalities after they fall in love and just morph them into some character that was created to obsess over the mc. In a way they both are immature people that don’t have anything else interesting in their lives. Sorry if this seemed harsh but it’s so upsetting to see potential and it be ruined by poor writing decisions.