So much potential wasted

soona June 3, 2024 1:42 pm

Honestly I love the plot/storyline and it makes me think of solo leveling a little bit..
Just a more horny,sexually disturbed version.

It's been a while since I stopped reading bl with non-con (so u can imagine i don't read much of them anymore or only manga instead of webcomic lol)

However I didn't mind bcz the story was still really interesting and the sexual violence/abuse was also on par with the characterization of team 1 members who are obviously all mentally unwell and fucked up..

But I didnt expected to have so much free porn with how good the story is. And really I mean the (non-consensual)sex scene(more like WHOLE CHAPTERS) were wasted bcz yugeon ability were never higlighted during the smut (beside w/ the commander and even then..) It alsmost feel like a plot hole bcz the first encounter with the commander,just a heated kiss brought him back from going rampant so technically he's a supper powerful guide and yet it never really showed with the other team one members??

Like canonically he should be able to guide any mild and recent injuries and pains with just a touch but its like it would take away the "reason" of having so much smut (bcz of course he can partially heal the strongest S class w/ a heated kiss but HAVE TO BE double dicked down to heal weaker S class/A class hunters...right)so his abilities were put in the background to be "retcon" and redefined every time its convenient.

My only theories in favor of the author is that :
1- yugeon is actually not that good of a guide and just hypercompatible w/ the commander (altough if he wasnt that good he would already be dead with all that gangr**e with the rest of team 1)
2- He abilities are never the stake for team 1 and it's all mind games to break him/have fun, which again ill be fine with (since it fits their characters )but then there's no psychological tag...

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