while the story was pretty good, i really hate how this author incorporates incest in almost all of her works...the addition of incest adds nothing to the plot and i think would have been a better story without it. it also comes out of nowhere...i was reading a normal chapter then bam incest, few chapters later bam bammore incest instead of the feeling of "love" the brother felt for the uke, it could've been other complicated feelings that would've had the same result and better impact (for the father and uncle too) :/ also the author suffers from same face syndrome because the main characters all look veryyy similar to Love Shuttle characters.. putting these two issues aside, i think the story itself was pretty good but it could've also delved deeper in the feelings/emotions of uke and seme (them actually getting to know eachothers past) but thats just my personal opinion :-p
ofc!! (▰˘◡˘▰) were you able to see the rest of my comment about the spoilers? i cant see it so i was making sure you were able to i have no hobbies :(
No I can't see it either but it's ok I don't wanna be spoiled hehe plus I read in someone else's comment that it's just bw the uke and his bro but it gets resolved ltr, so it's ok ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
while the story was pretty good, i really hate how this author incorporates incest in almost all of her works...the addition of incest adds nothing to the plot and i think would have been a better story without it. it also comes out of nowhere...i was reading a normal chapter then bam incest, few chapters later bam bammore incest instead of the feeling of "love" the brother felt for the uke, it could've been other complicated feelings that would've had the same result and better impact (for the father and uncle too) :/ also the author suffers from same face syndrome because the main characters all look veryyy similar to Love Shuttle characters.. putting these two issues aside, i think the story itself was pretty good but it could've also delved deeper in the feelings/emotions of uke and seme (them actually getting to know eachothers past) but thats just my personal opinion :-p