Omg i was thinking the same thing, I didn't feel like there was a plot (too much fluff ). But then again, maybe i just read too much korean mangas and yaois ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Yeah, you got me, I'm used to read mangas with really deep plot, or even the light hearted ones that I read have a really stablished plot, a point to an end. So this kind of thing without meaning are not my thing. I don't care about the dislikes because the people are blinded by their tastes, they are not going to respect another person opinion even though I wasn't rude, lol.
I have read yaoi mangas that had a lot of sex as their sell point and that mangas even had more plot and conflict than this one, this feels like a surreal fantasy with the only purpose of accomplishing fantasies of lonely women, and I don't read manga because of that, I read manga because I want to know the story of these amazing characters and how their life would be, I don't want to be the character, but well... I don't judge anyone who wants to, I was just making a review haha.
So there for it means that I don't like it, this is probably the last chapter that I'm going to read, but I wanted to understand with myself what I didn't like it...
First, I don't get why he's so inlove with her, yeah sure, she's cute, but he treats her like if she has done something special for him, or like if she was really unique; But she barely speaks, she's always blushing and they had never have a real conversation, I just don't get it.
Second, it feels like "a women fantasy". Thing that I dislike, it's like "50 shades of Grey", they just put in a lot of ideas of what they think a girl would want in order that the reader can think of herself as if she was Risa, and that's something that I don't enjoy, yeah sure, everyone wants romance in their life, but things like this? This is just a delirious farce, but everyone can dream whatever they want to dream about.
Third, there's no real plot. What is the plot? What is the conflict? I feel like this story was meant to be a 5 chapter thing (or a oneshot), and now out of nowhere they are trying to make a little of conflict. For the first 10 chapters I remember this comment section, we where all thinking that he was hiding something, some people was even saying that he could be a murderer hahaha, but we where reacting like that because there was absolutely no reason to why he fell inlove with he at THAT DEGREE, not a crush, he acts really inlove, and because this manga has absolutely no conflict at all, so we weren't seeing the purpose of the plot, it felt (still feels) empty.
And finally, the pace is ridiculously fast. You could have fixed my first three problems and this one specially, if the pace wasn't so freaking fast; The plot could have been about this girl with camp mannerism that starts feeling something for this guy in a cafe and he for her too so they start meeting once in a while until she finds out blah, blah, blah; That's a plot. They could have developed it in order to not feel it like "50 shades", so it would be not a vulgar/cliché "women fantasy", because it could have had a real plot, and not an excuse to show this rich guy giving it all for this girl who he barely knows and that I don't consider her specially beautiful, you know, there are characters that when you see drawn you can't avoid thinking "WOW, she's really beautiful", Risa has never make me think something like that. And if they have met slowly (and make them help each other in some situations, like, you know, with plot) I would get why he's so inlove with her, but no, no, no, no. Like a comment here said:
"This romance would take 1 year development for any of this
To happen in the real world -_-"
- KyokoRM
And that's just true, all the problems with this manga comes from that core.
I'm just going to say that to me, this manga is bad, the only good thing is that the art is decent (but not particularly beautiful). I would recommend this for a light read, but no spect some deep story and character development, because this doesn't have any. This kind of mangas are not my thing so I'm off.
Art: 6 (It's okay, but is not specially beautiful, but is not bad, I repeat is not bad)
Plot: 1 (Plot?)
Enjoyment: 0 (I was just waiting for something to actually happen)
Use of panels: 7 (they have good placement, so it's easy to follow)
Dialogue: 3 (Dialogue? Barely)
Total Rating: 3.4/10
Good Bye people, have a nice day
P.S. Sorry if had bad grammar, I wrote this really fast and english is my third language.