This shit is going nowhere

gigi May 30, 2024 11:07 pm

Reached ch 64 but i gotta pause and say this to future readers. I have been binge read this for a few days in my passing time and I honestly can’t find where the story is going. Same shits been repeating and the story progression is just lacking in every way. I’ve read other action/thriller bl too. Even with more smut filler scenes, they have wayyyy better storyline. (I’d recommend u guys to read Red Candy.) While this one, after 63 long chapters, I think i can count the smut fillers but i still dont know what the story is about if someone were to ask me to write a summary about it. All i know is the mcs are both red flag. One with no empathy, almost built to be a non-human organism, while the other dont have a functioning brain. Just letting ilay cross the boundaries with no hesitation. Ugh there’s so many things that irks me in this story but I’ll end it here.

Responses
    levipleasecallmeback May 31, 2024 10:05 am

    NO CUZ I WAS ABOUT TO COMMENT ON THIS. you’re right don’t let them silence you.

    this story is so fucking trash and it’s not even funny?? the filler for mc’s and the twinks relationship was nothing so it was incredibly forced to see how “deep” their relationship got. then with ilay, their relationship is really fake complex and it’s laughable. mc hates him + his actions disgust him, but then can’t find himself hating him and creates excuses out of thin air. made no sense… then the twin brother creating a machine gun blueprint from scratch as a child ??? YOURE JOKING!!! someone told me this was good and focused on plot lmao. i feel completely catfished and only finished reading in one sitting due to hate