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Thanks for the review man. I wasn't in the mood for a shit plot again, and you saved me
happy to help, is good that i can use my compulsion of having to read until the end for something lol
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And they are not good ones.
I liked the start of the story, poor girl fighting for a better life, she was angry, she was hard working, she had a personality.
At some point in the middle she became one of those goody-two-shoes fls that villanous mangas make fun of, so bland, everything came so easy, there was no conflict.
Where is the vengeance she wanted? For what was the whole covering my face to find the bad consort plot?
The story was full of plot holes, the characters lost their personality completely, and i dont mean they change for plot reasons, i mean they just took a turn a some point and went to lalaland.
One more thing, not everybody needs a baby, if the baby is going to disappear for like 10 chapters THEY DONT NEED A BABY, who's raising that child?
tldr: Too much girl bossing, too little sense
ps: the prince was princess no? am i crazy? was i drugged? help