Every interaction just feels stilted and forced, the dialogue is iffy at best, it just feels two layers removed from how actual humans talk and act. For example (this sequence just stuck out to me as particularly bizarre): getting sexually harassed, crying that you spilled water, ignore the previous sexual harassment and get into the person's shower, fall asleep on their couch where there's a brief obligatory nursing scene followed up by him basically forcing himself on him in his sleep. All in like 40 pages.
Every interaction just feels stilted and forced, the dialogue is iffy at best, it just feels two layers removed from how actual humans talk and act. For example (this sequence just stuck out to me as particularly bizarre): getting sexually harassed, crying that you spilled water, ignore the previous sexual harassment and get into the person's shower, fall asleep on their couch where there's a brief obligatory nursing scene followed up by him basically forcing himself on him in his sleep. All in like 40 pages.