Responses
i think that what made it SO bad for SO many people is the fact that the seme has been blatantly having sex with other people in the uke's bed in the uke's house.
yeah, i agree that there's A LOT worse than this (shivers) but there's no need for competency in bad writing.
eh, idk, bc i didn't take it so seriously anymore, i kinda enjoyed the end. all's well that ends well, right? ╮(￣▽￣)╭
So many bad comments....I thought this was going to be horrible but honestly.....I've read much worse.....This one was kind of funny and dumb sometimes and a little inconsistent peharps. But not bad.
Many people were bothered by the sleeping around thing, but that's not very different from so many mangas out there and those are even worse since they seem to allow the seme getting all the action and the uke being the pure virgin. I kind liked the seme devoction (In a twisted dumb WTF way) and the Uke getting confused and having to work out who he really liked. I just need more! A extra would be great!