Aight i'm at chap 35 and so far It's not really my cup of tea. The story itself would've b...

Chocopops May 23, 2024 1:17 pm

Aight i'm at chap 35 and so far It's not really my cup of tea. The story itself would've been very interesting had it been about any other people but unfortunately the author decided with these mcs. Firstly the mc has the mentality of a 5 year old with no common sense. He acts like a child oblivious and annoyingly innocent. You might say that It's because he was born a slave but being a slave doesn't mean you go around with negative iq. It's genuinely annoying to read how dumb he can be.

And ml on the other hand is ignoring all the very obvious signs and body language of the mc and just convinced that he's an experienced prostitute. You might also say that It's cause the mc said so himself but anyone with eyes could see that he's lying. Which is why Hammod could immediately tell that he wasn't actually a prostitute and was a normal slave.

All in all both main characters are dumb af which makes reading this kinda annoying. It's a shame cause the plot could've been really interesting it had so much potential if only the characters weren't being dimwits

Responses
    PalavaSohva June 30, 2024 10:23 pm

    Fr... I'm still confused about the relationship dynamic too.
    At first Eidar is like "I really hate doing this prostitute stuff but I don't want to get killed or left behind so I have to do it!" so he's really just doing it and other services out of fear
    But ten when Kay drops the lover thing Eidar is still just thinking about serving Kay??? Like I thought he didn't want to do that? And I don't mean the sex in itself but the way Eidar's going on about it like he's still just Key's personal slut.

    tarspoon July 11, 2024 10:19 am

    I think chars are stupid, plot is stupid, so everything is in stupid harmony. So I don't want to read this anymore.