This. Also I'm dropping it seems like MC is naive even with the 3rd regression.
what chapter did you realize this because i dropped it around the second chapter when i quickly got the gist. i was like i refuse to waste my time on such books again lmao
Lol atp we’ve all become experts at detecting bs. For me it was ch.10 but I’ll probably give it a go once there are more chapters to binge read as I always do. I don’t think it be too bad for times when you’ve nothing else to read unless u absolutely cannot stand her
there was a storyline skip in her narration (big jump from past life to modern reincarnation life) that wasn't laid out properly and that just screamed lazy writing for me. there are times i read books with no decent storyline/plot but made pretty clear they dont have a strong plot lol this one has. i thought the 1st chap had potential. until i saw the guy with long hair kissed her hand and flirted with her with the same line ive read on other books,,i cringed. it's my fault cus i read it raw i didnt read the summary lol i wouldnt have checked this out had i seen that line "i will become your woman" which means the mc & this book's romance trope aren't my cup of tea.. my bad (=・ω・=)
also this is just me saying it isn't for me. if it's for someone, good for them. to each their own hehe
btw i was already turned off by the writing. the last straw was just the gesture and line the guy made. i know i couldve given it a chance and find out if some of my questions and plot holes will be answered but i didnt wanna be bothered putting up with the guy's cringey advances especially if he's the ml (￣∇￣")
The writing is indeed veryy elementary. I’m so tired of the writing/comic industry in general as they mass produce the same generic stories with no plot, character building, world building etc. Istg even books aimed at 4 year olds have better writing, example Winnie the Pooh.
These companies are responsible for mass producing trash under fake pen names as some quick cash grabs. The industry has completely lost all sense of individuality and has been on a rapid decline for the past 15 years or so now. It’s evident in all forms of literature, I’m so tired of it and have thrown away all kinds of expectations
omg WHAT i havent even thought of that!!! years of reading these books and stumbling across hundreds of them that feels the same (art, story, and writing wise) and i never realized it couldve been mass produced by companies holy shit? yeah you’re right. capitalism truly has swallowed this world whole affecting all parts of the art & media industry that i once thought would have authenticity the longest. we’re doomed
It was when her family was nitpicking on her for some reason. Made me think something is going on and like she's just looking at them lovingly. Also the part where she was the one who wanted the deal but acts as if the guy wanted it like girl be for real.
YES EVERYTHING U SAID
Like ur the beggar in this relationship, act like it. Unnecessary rude ungrateful chars are such a turn off
Ugh as expected she’s the irritating type. I’m not going to comment much on the males because she’s the MC and I’m here for her stupidass. She has repeated the same shit about three whole times now yet she’s still a one track minded Mary sue. I’m already so over her it’s going to be a frustrating ride.
A few chapters in and I already understood why her fake shitty family got killed. Apparently it was done by ML and not the ex regardless I’m thankful to whoever did it.
She’s just too blind to realise her naivety will only bite her in the arse. Hopefully it gets better because apparently she will be the one to kill them this time but I bet it’s going to take her an eternity to get it over with alongside growing some much needed braincells
I prefer morally grey chars and women that put themselves first when needed.
Best thing is def the art. It saves this webtoon from whatever stupid generic tropes it’s hanging onto