Is it just me, or the plot is a little bit messed up? Almost every problem not solved prop...

I think it's because this was originally a Wattpad novel. And the writer seems inexperienced.
That's why there's no tension. No buildup. No emotion

Ah i see.. i thought it was a translated korean novel..

i really like the idea and characters.. but most all the times, the events were just poped up outta nowhere, i forgot what this was all about.. i would love to see more development though

It's gonna get better later you want some suffering and tears, later chapter will give you that

I think the way they executed the panel or the comics are the problem because when i read the original its fine and understandable but in this comics i feel like something is missing..... Or idk im not professional artis this is just my opinion

I have to read the novel asap ヾ(☆▽☆) is it under the same title?

yep