Noo I 100% get what u mean. Like I really enjoy it but it's definitely not the strongest writing. The plot is great and I like the characters, but the execution is weak at times.
I thought it was just me it feels like I should like these characters but they’re just so stiff and talk kinda weird at times
I often just attribute stiff dialogue to poor translation but it's definitely also the writing here lmao
I saw it's actually a Wattpad story before so maybe the stiff writing is coming not from translation but from the original work
No hate
But everything in this manhwa is so easily achieved. It's like child's play whenever there's a problem. No mystery or danger.
It's disappointing because the plot is so interesting I just it was written better.
The characters feel one dimensional and talk in such a robotic way.
It feels like a newby wrote it. And I know cause I used to write like this. It's hard to write organic dialogues that doesn't sound forced.
But because of this it's so hard for me to get into.
I know I will get hate for this. But remember it's just my opinion not fact