Ok I liked that ngl it was funny and cute and had its saucy moments, but I feel like the a...

cocobunny May 18, 2024 3:25 pm

Ok I liked that ngl it was funny and cute and had its saucy moments, but I feel like the author could have done more with this couple! Maybe we can see from Enoda’s POV on how cute he thinks MC is after the first love potion, or maybe even some extra chapters that show why he was so keen on bullying MC, maybe he liked him a little subconsciously and was acting out? I would have liked to see more with this couple!!
The fudanshi friend was funny but imo his character really needed to be toned out a lot.
Also the suppository scene was so unnecessary because I feel it added nothing to the plot or characters! They were about to confess and were on their way to fuck on their own, why was a mini suppository love spell necessary? xD All they needed was lube~
Anyways thats my review and its a shame author did not continue with this story because theres so much we could explore with these two! Its an interesting story with a lot of potential! ^^

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