Uhg I’m sorry but I find this story so embarrassing

Nik May 16, 2024 4:30 pm

1) started w an interesting dynamic between main couple (complex feelings, history, & Woojin *sorta* not recognizing Taemin) but as soon as Woojin kissed Taemin he just fell in love….like what happened to the tension/confliction….
2) sidelined main story for romance. Started w focus on mystery & tension, but after the romance started, the intrigue got benched
3) tonal whiplash. One minute triggered by meeting sorta rapist, the next a joke; one minute beating up bullies who drove a kid to suicide, the next the bully has a crush on u (?)
4) WOOJIN SUCKS??? & not even in the typical seme “stoic smartass” way (tho he’s that too lol), he’s acc heartless ._. he watched siwon getting gang r’d & called it “BORING” hell, I have more examples (& forgot even more lol), but that alone says it all. Fkin insane
5) the ending? Taemin just lives on as Siwon ig, & the brother’s the only one “punished” whole first quarter dedicated to fighting bullies just to let all rapists off scot free lol sure. & I get Siwon can’t magically come back to life (? tho he magically body swapped…), but god, knowing he can’t even be mourned cuz no one knows he’s dead is devastating. Siwon was so tortured and alone, & not even the story/author cares lol

Responses
    Lightsaber May 30, 2024 7:03 pm

    1. Agreed, but there isn't enough chapters for tension/conflict to happen unfortunately.. i too wanna let Tae min's (mc) feelings to actually give time to bloom.

    4. Woojin definitely sucks and the story actually explains why he lacks emotions to the point he doesn't care about anyone at all except for Tae min

    5. Right??!! Artist/author made Siwon a fucking tool for the plot, he was IRRELEVANT

    Lightsaber May 30, 2024 8:38 pm

    Wait no, taemin fell in love with woojin when he first saved him (chapter 21) but because he's a kid he hasn't realized what he's feeling yet and the kiss he got was a confirmation

    Nik June 2, 2024 1:06 am
    Wait no, taemin fell in love with woojin when he first saved him (chapter 21) but because he's a kid he hasn't realized what he's feeling yet and the kiss he got was a confirmation Lightsaber

    Yea, I def feel like tae’s been in love w Woojin for a rly long time, I just wish he had some time to actively fight those feelings. Author could’ve benched/crunched some other scenes to make it fit imo
    Also rlly? I guess I didn’t notice? Lol but still, imo, unless they’re an acc villain, I feel like love interests should only b so cruel lol. Cuz he rly was just unlikable to me
    Thx for responding tho ^^ I’m happy getting diff perspectives