Some poor narrative choices

hello_there May 14, 2024 1:00 pm

After doing something so dumbass as to go speaking with him without precautions she could have threatened him to have him killed in pieces to forcefully retrieve the glass container if he did not give it back. Aside from that, at this point, she should be honest with the dad, lay her cards on the table and find the most efficient solution together. I can understand some necessary narrative-driving choices in the construction of the plot, but this is straight-out bothersome for the readers. What's whit an op main character who acts dumb by ignoring logic possible choices (against her own interests)? This makes the whole story less engaging and compelling to read. You want a protagonist to make the most of her resources, she wasn't portraited as someone with poor judgement till now

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