This story would be a lot better if it weren't so choppy. It feels like there are pages missing that's really disrupting the flow of the story. If there's NOT pages missing, then this has been poorly story-boarded.
This story would be a lot better if it weren't so choppy. It feels like there are pages missing that's really disrupting the flow of the story. If there's NOT pages missing, then this has been poorly story-boarded.