Just read to ch5

silver000 May 10, 2024 10:44 pm

From what I see, the Story is really light read and only focused on the fl. It may seem a little early to judge the Story, but for an instand the Motives of the characters doesnt align.
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Its kind of irrational how trusting the fl is towards the ml's Mother and lions generelly, though she knows the original storyline, where the lions hated her from the beginning bc she was a weak blue bird. Like she showed the mother instand her abilities, she had hidden from her family for years.
And fl's family was supposed to be a great bird Clan with no comparison, but they were soo weak against the lions, their mansion was invaded and the head of the family was beaten to the wheel chair. And that brings me to the next point, that is so irrational.
The fl took such a forward revenge on her family and ruined it though she knows its a marriage of convinience that can only exist, if her 'soo great' family can provide the exchange- she herself would have been useless. Like she doesnt know the fact, that the ml's mother spotted an imprint from her son on her.
There are so many issues I have already with the Story. Why is the fl soo expectant of this child marriage? Why didnt she fight back before the lions came (she could already shift and use her ability for one year and knew the og story line)? Why is the ml's mother so nice to the fl, though she knows about that prophecy? Shouldnt she be more wary at least?
There are so many more questions, so I will drop it now.

Responses
    Applecreampied May 29, 2024 6:45 am

    I mean, do take note that the FL is still a child who just happens to remember her memories from her past life, so it makes sense that she’s still naive and easily trusting with seemingly dependable adults. I imagine that a child wouldn’t suddenly become wise and smart from remembering their past lives unlike someone who was reborn with their memories intact. But all in all, this is just poor writing or maybe the translation is removing nuances from the original language.