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Same for the second couple, I guess I'm not a fan of the story telling.
I've read better short stories tbh
Not to say it's bad but not my style I guess
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Okay I like the premise of the story:
guy who thinks to much x guy who doesn't think at all
It feels like the story is written to be ambitious and at times it's really adorable but it feels so awkward, like missing chemistry. Everything feels so sudden and after 4 chapters I feel like I only read 1 chapter of actual content (story wise).