I don't think it's the same story tho
the plot is different?
This is basically a continuation
In the Raws is all together the same story ...
It’s the same story altogether. The author just decided to continue it. Originally the story concluded with Hayden taking Brett’s hand so they could fuck in chapter 6. I think it was a smart choice on the author’s part to continue, so now we can see more of Brett and Hayden as characters, as well as dive into their motivations more.
Continuation after Hayden accepted brett offer.
As someone who read the short story version first (6 chapters) what's the difference between this one (serialised) and the shorter one?