Ugly*
The*
When he said all the good stuff and the seme face turned black and then his dick turned black like wtf was that? Like I’m enjoying the story but damn if that didn’t make my tummy hurt with the deformed stomach shots.
Omg, same! I generally don't like that stomach poking thing and the fact that top's pp can stab bottom 's lungs. But I got used to it, because it's the case in almost every single story. Not to talk about the fact that bottom guys has pp size of my pinky finger. Like if he's a bottom, it doesn't mean he's not a man *crying silently*
Plus the sentence 'Why is it getting bigger'
If I read it in one more story, I'll off myself hahhahahah. It sometimes get me wondering did the people who wrote this ever went to biology classes or saw the real pp even in the photo xD
Sorry I got to carried away with writing. I'm enjoying the story but there are genuinely scary moments.
Nah. My favorite is when they say their ass is getting wet or dripping and they haven’t used any lube or anything. Or after the top fingers the bottom and it’s all wet and stuff and then he’s holding the dudes hands and touching his face and shit. Like yeah sure it could happen but they do it to guys who don’t even know they are the bottom yet so no prep at all.. after a long day of school or work with no shower
That as well T.T
Or doing it like few hours after meal, in for example car or office, without as you pointed taking shower or doing any kind of prep. It physically hurt my brain
Right like if I’m prepared, we fucking first then eating. You’re not tricking me with you greasy ass food. Like I’m freshly showered don’t fuck with me. I’m a snack
For some reason this 'X-ray' of his dick inside was uncomfortable to look at (•ᴗ•)
As for the size, it's nothing new for top guys to have lethal weapons hitting their knees while they walk lol. And it looked kinda ugluly, Idk, maybe because the color and shape looks more like dildo than real thing. But it's also usual. (I'm not complaining, it was just fun seeing all yhe comments, so I just wrote mine as well)